Topic 1

OUTLINE: EXTRA ACTIVITIES
Introduction:
After graduating from high school, you have to pass an entrance examination to continue your learning. When you get there, you will find the way that you have learnt at high school is very different from the one in university. Therefore, you will be in shock about this, you must try your best to adapt with that learning style, I think it’s very difficult to do this. But in university, there are many extra activities for all of the students to join in. they can help you to decrease stress. In my opinion, when you take part in extra activities, you will get not only advantage but also disadvantage
Body:
+ paragraph 1: Extra activities can give you many interesting things to make your life better.
Make friends
Get many strange experiences
Know more about the different culture
I think joining in these activities is the best way for you to have a happy life because you can relax after learning hard.
+ paragraph 2:
If you don’t know how to manage your time, they will give you many bad results.
Have many activities to join in, you will neglect your study.
Stay up late and get up early to finish your exercises.
You have to learnt how to manage your time to have good results.
Conclusion:
Although they have many disadvantage, we can get only their advantage. It depends on you, please try your best to get the best results.

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  1. - the topic is interesting.
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  2. Hook is interesting.Grammar is good.Thesis statement is ok

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  3. the topic is suitable for students
    gram,unity and coherent are ok
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  4. _topic is ok
    _gram is good
    _unity,coherent is ok

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  5. grammar is good
    introduction is ok
    idea is ok
    unity is good
    coherence is ok

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